When I come home, there's lots to do there, too. We just finished building a corral in the back yard for our Labradobbie, Tucker. No kidding, it's a corral, complete with split rail fences. He sort of runs like a horse, so it seemed appropriate. We redid the flower garden, finally started a vegetable garden, put more rock in the driveway ... and somehow visited the grandkids and attended our daughter-in-law's college graduation. All while it rained every other day, I swear.
So the days go fast until just before bedtime, when I remember Dawn. Dawn Johnson is my editor friend. She has a sharp eye for what's wrong with a story, what's marginally okay, and what's just plain stupid. She's a terror about commas, which is a problem, because I'm very protective of my commas. ("Back off, lady! They're mine and I'll do what I want with them!") She also counts exclamation marks! And claims I use too many!
Dawn has had the manuscript of my second novel, An American Fairy, for about three weeks. She's the first person besides my wife to see it. I'm scared witless what she's going to think of it. Too short? Too long? Not enough humor? Too much humor? Too much romance? The right amount of magic? And how many typos and word use mistakes will she find? Most important, will she like the story?
So the days go fast and slow. Waiting on Dawn. I hate waiting.
(Check out Dawn's cool blog site, Menopause Press, at http://menopausepress.net/?page_id=21 )
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Dawn here...for those of you who are curious how the read is going, you'll be glad to know the ms. is back in John's hands. He's not waiting anymore! Of course, he's probably also grumbling like an old troll at all the suggestions I made. Never fear! The story's fabulous and Noah and Willow as contentious, adventurous and sexy as ever. I just can't resist killing a comma on occasion or telling John if a scene's too long. I know the result will be a fine edit in his hands to bring you all an awesome story.
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